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Below are the words from a picture book I’ve been working on.

This is the first version that I was happy with – which took many, many drafts

Version 1

Until I became unhappy with it and rewrote it using real children rather than princes.

Version 2

Until I became unhappy with it and rewrote it with the box becoming a friend rather than being an object to play with.

Version 3

Which one of these three would you want to read?

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